Renee LeCompte

Hmm... I read all this a while ago. Now that I found it again I just decided to post the thoughts I had back when I originally read it. ******* WARNING: SPOILER HEAVY ************ **** **** **** **** First of all... dragons are clearly 'da best' in here. No equals, no betters. If all higher intelligences can shapeshift, why did all but dragons forget how? Wouldn't they try to be dragons as much as possible? Second: if a dragon were to take down something small, then shapeshift into a mouse and eat it until they were full, would they still be equally sustained if they shapeshifted back into a dragon? Third: I don't think dragons should be the fastest. They have too much going for them already, even though they're dying off. They should decide to shapeshift into a swift bird when crossing the ocean, for the speed. Fourth and final: When they have to sprinkle dragon's blood across the dead lands, why do they sacrifice themselves first? It would be more effective to kill the evil dragon and sprinkle his blood first, followed by hers later. This would revive more land, no? Sorry if this seems to be trying to poke into your story, think of it more as enthusiastic. =]

Oh yeah you can really tell when I wrote this that I was in love with dragons. That was 9th or 10th grade, or something. If I had the kind of freedom I wanted on this writing, I think I would have done what you said in your comment... but, I was 'collaborating' (I still wrote it all!) with someone else. They said, 'uh-uh, the evil dragon (Rhogg) can't die or anything!' So, I had to do it this way :\ Oh well!

Still 'collaborating', or can ya maul over the story now? =]

Who dosent love dragons? ^_^